Unfinished V03

This is another pre-mature Render for the model I'm was doing for the Science Village Complex Designed by Egypt's Renowned Arch. Gamal Backry! it still needs a lot of work... but i submitted it to see what u think of it.... wether architecturally or Graphically... comments most welcomed......

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I'll so Offend to make Offence a skill....
Redeeming times when men think Least I will